After close to
three years of writing and rewriting, and editing my first dark fantasy novel,
I have finally reached the point where I can say, “I am done”. Done with the story, that is. Because then comes sending out your story to
trusted beta-readers. In my case,
friends who are well-read in the fantasy genre, and whom I can count on to be
brutally honest.
From my
research, I discovered that what you want in a beta-reader is someone who will
be an actual reader, an audience. What
you do not want is someone who will tell you how you can 'fix' your book and
then lay out how it should be changed.
“But,” I told
myself, “isn’t this what I want? Someone
to suggest what can make my book better?”
At some point,
yes, but not on the initial reading, because you want your beta-reader to read
your story the way your potential audience would. Your potential audience is not going to dissect
the book as they read. They are going to
find a comfy place to sit, open the book, and—hopefully—disappear into the
world you have created.
Think about it (I know I had to!). As you read a book you come across characters you love, hate, are indifferent to, or keep forgetting. You either believe those characters' struggles or roll your eyes at how absurd the situations are. By the time you are done reading the book, you are either left wondering what will happen next or not care at all. It’s always either “Screw the sequel” or “I can’t wait to find out what happens next”.
These emotions
are very much apart of reading. And to
be honest, this was something I was not truly aware of until I came across this.
Ask your
beta-readers to jot down those moments (page number, dog-ear, etc) of “wtf”
while they are reading, but don’t bog them down with the task of checking your
grammar and spelling because it will take away from their reading experience. You, as the writer, need to find out if they
connected with your story or not.
This does not
mean that you should hand them your unrevised and unedited first draft and
expect them to somehow enjoy their reading experience, because they won’t. Fyi, my first few drafts are awful! What you want to give your beta-readers is
your best work possible. You want to
respect them so they don't run away screaming.
If, however, you
need someone to read what you have written as you go along (as I do) then find
someone who you trust and ask them to be burdened with the glorious purpose of reading
your unrefined chapters. Oh my poor
husband, the things he has read in those many rough chapters where I am trying
to get an idea out…and the things he has read and will not let me forget even
though I wish he would!
Just don't let your beta-readers channel their inner Loki and take over your story. |
So this is the
set-up I have decided to use, and that I feel works for me. But maybe as I journey ever further down the
road of “what comes next” and learn more, I will change my mind. Do your own research and figure out what works for you and what you want from your beta-readers.
By the way, and
I am sure this goes without saying, always thank your beta-readers and never
take them for granted. They are a vital
part to seeing your book come to fruition.
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